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Shine On Me

(dreamer by neslihans)



Summertime, a favourite past time
The favourable past we attempt to live by
Which haunts us so
We icon against Marilyn herself

What was done, has been undoneAdd Image
It's undoing now done
And so I, too, am done.

The favourable past, which must be left in the past
As now IS our favourable time to live by
...summertime.

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  1. AnonymousJuly 09, 2009

    a new twist to the naisaikus !! i liked this style :)

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  2. Tumblewords:July 09, 2009

    Nice style - I like this one!

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  3. andyJuly 09, 2009

    Summertime, phew! a bit of a tongue twister!!

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  4. Janet JarrellJuly 10, 2009

    Thank you all for checking in - this did not sound like a tongue twister in my head, nor did it appear to be when I wrote it down and scibbled all around it on the paper...then I read it. Funny twist.

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  5. Kenia SantosJuly 10, 2009

    Though I'm not a big fan of summertime, I liked your lines a lot. The twist feels like a big hug!

    Kiss on the tip of your nose!

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  6. Kenia SantosJuly 12, 2009

    I know, I know - me again!! It's just to tell you that there's an award for you in Poesia Torta. Kiss your eyes!

    Love from Brazil!

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  7. PrintempsJuly 13, 2009

    i love this summertime...thanks for that comment...Thanks Kenia for introducing me to a new friend...

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